- Post of the Week #33
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In search of Adam: Grandma.
(nominated by Zinnia Cyclamen)
Coming out of the Tyne Tunnel.
I feel anxiety.
Turning onto the coast road.
My eyes scan buildings for familiarity.
I am hoping that grandma has evaporated milk.
Our judges said:
“A poignant post all of us can relate to.
Short and to the point, and yet with a depth of feeling.”
“Makes you care about both the featured people, but then sadly lets you down a little. Leaves you empty, unsatisfied, unconcluded. What happened next? Is there a “to be continued?”"
“I like the short sentences. Very moving post. But not too much, I wasn’t booing my eyes out at the end which I appreciate on a Sunday night or I might never stop, Sunday night being the night when all things can get me down.”
Your shortlister this week was Sarah R, and your judges were Anna Pink, Mike, Peter and Sarah P.
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